Dan Garrison
"I think your idea is very good and very well thought out. The only problem I can see is making the comedy parts actually look funny on camera. The cyclist crash would be very funny but would also be very difficult to capture."
Tom Bassant
"I like the idea of having the contrasting main characters I think it will work really well if you make some good dialogue between them. Some of your idea however could be quite difficult to film such as the hotel scene. Maybe you should choose an easier location to film. Overall I like the idea and would prbably watch a film like this becuase I love action films, but where's the car chase?"
Tim Odell
I like it guys, it has potential. Just remember though comedy is very difficult, what may seem funny as an idea may not work out once filmed. Saying that I can clearly see some of your comedy will appeal to most people in your age range. Still, I would say you're better off going more down the action route as I think this will be easier to achieve. Also as a musician I would suggest you think about what type of music you are going to use in your film. Music is a major part of creating mood and it may influence your idea."
Katie Corness
"I think your idea is okay but could be improved in certain areas. For example I'm not too keen on the idea that the assassin is retired when a very young actor will be playing him. I think you should also put more effort into the chase scene and final confrontation as these will probably be the best parts of your film."
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