First scene feedback - Steve

We have successfully edited the first two scenes of our short film. So far these two scenes estbalish the plot of the film. However we are already approcahing 4 minutes and are considering cutting them down to make more time for the action scenes and the ending.

One of the members of the media staff Steve watched our two scenes and gave us some helpful feedback. He said,

"The opening shots are excellent and very well thought out. Try and keep the same standrard throughout the rest of the film. The split screen effect you have used is very effective and well excecuted. However I think you would be wise to cut it down to allow yourselves more time for the middle and end of your film."