We asked some of our peers to watch our completed music video and give us their feedback - both positive and negative. We recorded their response and here it is:
"It really builds towards the end! I like how the pace starts of slower and then quickens as it progresses. I definitely think it's emotional! It has certainly made me want to know what happens to the two of them. I like how they never meet, they're always apart. I also like the P.O.V shots, they really heightened the emotion and it left me asking questions, which I think was the intention?"
Lucinda Hurst, 18
"The black and white is really cool. It's good how it changes to and from colour and black and white. The actual shots are really good too; it's nice how you're seeing a sort of mirror image of the two characters. I think there could have been even more of that though, two of them at the same time. You've managed to create sympathy - I feel really sorry for the two of them. I like the climax at the end with the fast cuts. And it's really effective how the people look straight at you - makes it more emotional!" Daniel Hilton, 18
"The editing is so great! It really engages you and draws you into the story. The shots of scenery and stuff are nice. And I really like the part where the traffic is sped up behind! It's like they're lost in time, which is so sweet. Maybe they should have found each other at the end though? That would make me happier. But I guess the mystery works and leaves you wondering..." Bethany Sharkey, 16
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