We showed the script to our fellow class mates, here's the comments we received.
"The conversation between Matt and Stubbs is too long."
"I dont think the al capone joke is that funny."
"I think Terry trying to do a spin kick is too over the top, he should show his stupidity more subtly."
"It would be cool if you saw Matt and Terry actually equipping themselves with the weapons.
From the feedback and our own reflection we have decided to:
Shorten the phone conversation
Remove the hotel scene and replace it with an alternative
Cut out the Al Capone joke and the spin kick
Focus more on Terry and Matt getting weapons
Change the disguise from a Frenchman to just a simple fake glasses and nose.
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